I am a student at Wigram Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 20 June 2018
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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ReplyDeletehi Holly it is Mattisin.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you put some pitures on your post.
Now could you put some cap-til letters and you make the writing bigger.
Is that helpful feedback or do you feel you need more
ReplyDeleteWow that blow my mind(sarcastic)I like the way you put the password that always needs to be safe on your poster is that helpful feedback or do you feel you need more
por shanaya
Hi holly
ReplyDeleteI like the way you added pictures about private information! When I read your post I learnt a lot. Maybe next time you could make the words a bit bigger
hi holly it is shelby riddell and i love you kork so much
ReplyDeleteshelby riddell love you work so much and work had too and from shelby riddell
ReplyDeleteshelby riddell said i love you work so much
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ReplyDeletehi holly it sotheara here i like your private information it help me not to do theses thing
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ReplyDeletethis is geat because this is showing people to not share their private information to anyone
ReplyDeletegood job
Deleteamazing work holly
ReplyDeletehi it is shelby riddell and i love you work and try had next time from shelby riddell
ReplyDeletehi holly i like really like your private information now could you add ore detail
ReplyDeletethis is amazing you have done so good on telling us what we should not tell and what we can tell others.
ReplyDeletenext time you could probably add the things that we are allowed to show on public