todays writing group our teacher gave us a sentence we had to try and make the sentence better here it is

The sensational ship circumnavigate maiestically until the idotic captain steered into a bulky ripple wave an got everyone moist

this week we have been learning 4 times table hope you enjoy

Text to Self

In the text it says….	My connection….	I felt….. because
Mr Sutton - “Molly Anderson. You were supposed to tidy up your desk after school yesterday. You’ll have to do it at playtime.”	When my friend told me to help her clean the tray we were share our stationary	I felt happy because i like cleaning
Mr Sutton - “I know I know. This is really disappointing but there is nothing I can do about it.”	When i bringed a toy to school and my teacher said that she couldnt do anything about it	I felt sad because i couldnt get my toy back
Molly - “Wait a minute I think I’ve got something mouldy in my desk. Yep thought so. This cheese is all green and spotty.”	When i left a apple in my room for 1 year	I felt weird because i left a apple in my room
Your own example….mr sutton said go and get your sicence book	I left my writing book at home	Disappointed because i left my work at  home

 Text to Self 

In the text it says….	My connection….	I felt….. because
“Let me in! Let me in! It’s freezing out here.”	Once upon a time my brother locked me out of  the house I was so cold my hair started to freeze	I felt angry because my mum didn't notice that i was outside` and also angry with my brother because he just ignored me
“The Grasshopper had never worked so hard in his life… He was exhausted.”	Once i hade to clean my bedroom because it was messy It took me 2 hours	I felt exhausted that i cleaned all of my bedroom
“But don’t give me all the food to me. Give some of it to the ants.”	My mum gave me heaps of food i told my mum to give it to my sister	I felt happ because  i gave some food to my brother
All winter the grasshopper worked for the ants	Once i hade to work all summer doing gardening	I felt happy because i got the job done

Word	I have never seen this before	I have seen this word before	Write the sentence the word is used	I think this word means…..	Expert definition….
Colony		yes	The ants were gathered  food for their colony	I think it means a place where ants stay live and for a place for winter	An ant colony is the basic unit around which ants organize their life cycle
Insulated		NO	3-2keThe ants insulated there colomey	Building colony	protected by interposing material that prevents the loss of heat or the intrusion of sound.
Pleasant		yes	The grasshopper was pleasant	Happy expected	giving a sense of happy satisfaction or enjoyment.
Unexpected		no	The grasshopper said something unexpected	Something that he wasn't waiting for	ot expected or regarded as likely to happen.

reading

the cotton bud measuring

hi this is freddy 
stomach = 2 cotton bud
head = 1 cotton bud
ear = 1 cotton bud
arm = 1
leg = 1

i merged two animals together

my ending to spidermans story

my spider man story

Start Writing Here:

There they were Spider man and a mystery girl standing on the edge of a building waiting for the Green Hulk villain finally he arrived  spiderman and hulk start fighting boom hulk punches S/pider man woosh Spider man knocks of the building he uses his web to get back on top of the building Spider man says to the mystery girl we have 1 hour until this building blows up. spider man and mystery girl race to the bomb there it is says spiderman the bomb spiderman walks over to the bomb the clock is ticking said spiderman he gets some cord cutters to cut the red wire to the bomb there were 2 red wires and blue and green spider man said he did know which one to cut he goes for the red wire he cuts it Spider man said it worked next thing he knew mystery girl isn't there he goes outside hulk is fighting mystery girl hulk punches mystery girl she falls back outside the building spiderman looks down flies down to save her.spider man swoops in the air and groughs her and flies down everyone cheering for spider man mystery girl reveals her mask it was
A girl with brown hair and a costume. With brown eyes like hazel eyes  and black eye brows.spider man said to mystery girl come on we don't have time we need to go and catch hulk the villain.spider man seen hulk on the news setting a bomb in the store.COME ON QUICK WE NEED TO FIND HIM before he sets the bomb off.let's go spider man said its only 3 streets  down we can make it in time i will use my webs to get there finally we arrived at the warehouse


for the past 2 weeks squad writers have been working on a story about spiderman .

my reading week 8

 

                                                                the king of winter

What I see is a long icy river.from a magical wonder land. What I see is a white fluffy  polar bear looks angry.what else i see is 2 penguins standing next to each other.the penguin are black and

white.and black floppy feet.What else I see is a dark green turtle Walking On Ice. The person looks cold. person is wearing a square  weird hat. And a black long coat and is holding a black walking cane.what else i see is a long brown trees with white snow on it what else i see is a

sunset bright light.the season looks like winter.what else i see is snow  coming from the sky

There is a little village at the back with a white long white door the polar bear is standing on a edge of ice

The castle

The sandcastle The sand castle looked like brown sugar. The sandcastle is shaped  like a castle.the children were at the beach. Patting The sand in the  bucketTo make a perfect sandcastle. The Waves sounded like fish swimming  in the sea. The sandcastle had decoration. Like seashells everywhere. The kids felt extremely happy because they had spent their time at the sunny beach.The end

who wants to be a millionaire

lost baby fox